| my book is called VOYAGERS and there is three kids on a weird planet called meta prime . And it's full of fire and lava and it's really crazy in there so if i was one of them it would be awesome and how far did in my book you say i got to chapter 10 in my book. And the person who wrote the book her name is robin and she a woman and she wrote this book and the photo that is robin and she wrote the book for kids to read it .and I'm still on chapter 5 in the book. and now a war has started on the planet meta prime. but who stared it alive it about to get wild.dash and the others need to find a way to get out of this war that someone put on. And why did he or she do it. And that crisis |
Thursday, 21 February 2019
my book voyagers game of flames
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It sounds like you are reading a Science Fiction novel. Is that a picture above your words- it doesn't seem to be displaying very well.
ReplyDeleteHi Liam
ReplyDeleteI am Ronan from Rawhiti School
I like how you featured your favorite parts of the book
Maybe next time you should read over your writing to make sure it makes sense
For example you have said that you are on chapter 10 but later you had said that you are on chapter 5
also you have said Robin is the author of the story three times in the same sentence